A good friend of mine read ANoF and reviewed it. The review is below copied from Goodreads.com in its entirety:
As this was a short story, I will make this short… I thoroughly enjoyed this short story, and wish I could know more about these characters. Also, I loved the language of the story; it felt old and mysterious.
What will you think of this short story?
Keep your bite,
-S.C. Parris